So in this version, the text lines are all stuck on in one go, you have a certain amount of time to find them, then you have to say them all. This may be a better game mechanic. Is the idea of going to the beginning each time kind of weak as a game, but maybe more powerful as an art aesthetic?
Now I have watched the video, this could work better. Maybe if each have a diff monologue. But also that it is about getting those around to join in iwth the counting of the lines. But what would Shakespeare say?